When a series ends

I’ve never written a books series but I might one day and it kind of terrifies me. When a series becomes popular, the expectations from readers are key high and so many become disappointed when the author ends things in a way they didn’t expect or like. I just finished the final book in Lauren Oliver’s Delirium series, which got me thinking on this subject. I loved the first two books (see here) and was desperate to read the third.

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This series is a YA dystopian story about a society where love is treated as a disease and everyone is cured when they reach a certain age of the ability to love. The main character Lena is desperate to avoid getting sick before her cure date until she meets Alex and learns exactly what love is and then begins her fight to save it. The second book ended with a big cliffhanger and this book picks up three days later – Lena is on the run with the resistance, torn between two boys and unsure whether they can survive against the Government and rough life in the Wilds.

What’s interesting about this series is that each book has a different structure – the first book is told from Lena’s point of view and includes extracts from Government propaganda about love; the second is told from Lena again but flits between the past and present, and the final book is spilt between Lena and her ex best friend Hana who has been cured.  I think the different structures work and help keep us hooked – you never know what’s coming next and Requiem shows us what it’s like for someone in society fighting for love to be banned and someone who’s desperate to change things. I’ve read some disappointed reviews about how the book ends with some loose ends for you to interpret but what I enjoyed was the focus on the individual and their story. Yes they take place in the wider fight against the Government but we stay focused on the characters we know.

Ultimately, this story is about love and when love is banned, the choices and risks people take to fight for it. I think it’s clever that it doesn’t paint society as completely wrong or the resistance as completely right – it’s hard in the Wilds, people turn on each other and die from the elements, starvation or fighting with the authorities and in society, some are doing really well but others are poor, some find the cure has made then calmer and more focused, some find it didn’t work. There’s no black and white – the characters have to make their choices again and again.

Overall I’d highly recommend this series. I like how it broke rules and ended in a way us readers can debate. I feel for the author and how some are pleased and others not as she write a brilliant first book and expectations were high. I don’t know whether I’ll ever write a series but I definitely learned some things from this one and it kept me entertained right to the end, which I guess is all you can really ask for from a book series.

Has a books series ever disappointed you? 

Victoria

xoxo

Writing rules

This picture has been floating around Facebook and made me laugh out loud (yep LOL for real):

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There are so many “rules” writers are supposed to follow, it becomes exhausting to try to read and follow them all. Especially for new writers it can be so easy to look up all the writing rules and try desperately not to make a mistake. Sometimes though your creativity can be stumped and let’s be honest, rules are made to be broken right?

Some rules are necessary like showing not telling although from my own experience this can be tough to get right or word counts – don’t send an agent a 200,000 word novel and some are there because some things have become cliches like beginning your novel with your main character waking up. But even so, there are exceptions out there. Divergent by Veronica Roth, for example, is a book I loved and has been really successful – look out for the film version soon – and it opens with the main character looking at herself in the mirror – one of the no-no’s if you read the “rules”. It works in Divergent though because the character is only allowed to look at her reflection when her mum cuts her hair once a year – straight away we know she’s in a different world and we’re intrigued about it. Technically, Ms Roth broke a rule though.

In my own book, I have broken one of these “rules” by using flashbacks. A lot of writing tips sites and books say not to use this device but it’s in there and my agent even encouraged me to add more of them. If I’d listened to and followed the rules out there, I may not have written the same book.

A recent article in the Guardian made me really angry by criticising writers on how they use Twitter – again giving us more rules to follow. You can read the article here. Writers find Twitter useful because generally we’re working alone and it allows us to communicate with other writers and when we’re published, with our readers. And let’s face it, we’re often full to the brim with self-doubt so if someone on there says something nice about our books, we are going to be flattered and hell, even retweet it. So, what? I think you should be yourself on social networking and run your Twitter how you way to – obviously, if you’re kind of mean you’re not going to get anywhere but you should be free to interact with your fans. If I ever get a 5* review, you can be sure I’ll shout about it :)

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I suppose this post is a rather long-winded way of saying that your writing (and social networking) needs to be your creation, you need to find and express your voice in the only way you can and this might mean breaking some of those writing “rules”. I don’t think any truly successful book has ever got to that point by being quiet – they’ve got there by being different and shouting about those differences. Even if you think they’re badly written (naming no names here but you can guess) they’ve made a splash and I think if you want to, you need to follow your own path.

What do you think about writing rules? Have you ever broken them?

Victoria

xoxo

Sunday Songs

Music I’ve been loving this week:

Crystal Bowersox – Dead Weight

Laura Marling – Where can I Go?

Kodaline – High Hopes

Bridgit Mendler – Ready or Not

Thea Gilmore – Love Came Looking For Me

Tich – Dumb

Chloe Howl – No Strings (explicit)

Leann Rimes – Borrowed

What are you guys listening to?

Victoria

xoxo

Barely Breathing – Rebecca Donovan

A couple of months ago I read the first book in this series Reason To Breathe and you can read my review of that book here. The first book ended on a huge cliff-hanger and this sequel picks up the story six months later. I expected the book to start immediately after that cliffhanger but instead you get a prologue written by the main character telling you what happened and then we jump to the present day.

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I quite liked the fact that this book is a new story, it definitely took me places I didn’t think it would but I would recommended reading the first book so you understand all the motivations of the characters. In this book, Emma moves in with her estranged mother and sets out to learn about her past. Emma isn’t the easiest character sometimes, she kept a lot of things secret in the first book and it takes her a while to learn her lesson on that in this one. We get a new character in this book – her mother’s younger boyfriend Jonathan and he has his fair share of demons which bonds him to Emma.

I suspect some readers won’t like the Jonathan storyline as they love Emma’s boyfriend Evan but I actually liked how he got Emma to share things and open up, which she really needed to learn to do, he was there for her and her mother and got her to face up to her mother’s issues. Obviously the fact that he’s sleeping with her mother is a bit icky but I quite liked him :)

As this is Emma though she does stick up for herself in the end of this book but hurts people in the process. Unfortunately, she then falls into the trap of blaming herself when really she is the victim. I thought this was realistic and you want to shake her in the end as she takes herself away from everyone in a fit of regret for her actions. I was expecting another cliffhanger and we got one, leaving the window open or the final book and I have no idea where it will take Emma or us.

This book was a real page turner for me and I really wanted to know where things were heading. I was rooting for an outcome that didn’t happen but I totally get why it didn’t and although Emma makes some mistakes and keeps things to herself too much, I still rooted for her. Actually, I think I enjoyed this sequel more than the first book so I hope the final one ends the story with a bang.

Do you like sequels to take you to unexpected places?

Victoria

xoxo

Birthday treats

Yesterday I turned the dreaded 30! Luckily I had a lovely day so some of the sting was taken out of the scary age :) I had lots of lovely messages from you guys so thank you and I woke up to a balloon, cake and lots of cards.

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I had a girly day planned with my mum who brought me a gorgeous necklace from Links. For some reason taking photos of it was hard but you can kind of see it here:

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We went to Harrods and the Paris cafe Laduree for a glass of champers and I had the most amazing chocolate eclair and my mum had a slice of chocolate orange cake. So yummy. I would highly recommend it. I really could get used to this lifestyle :)

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I used the money I got from family and friends to buy a watch in Harrods and ended up with more Links jewellery :) None of the photos I took came out so here’s one from the internet. As usual with me there was some drama though as the watch didn’t work and we had to trek to another store to get a replacement.

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After shopping, we went to Covent Garden for a mooch and then had an early dinner in a restaurant called Sophie’s there. We spent so long looking at their cocktail menu in confusion that the waiter took pity and made up two he thought we’d like and they were delicious and pretty alcoholic :)

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And here we are already looking a little tipsy:

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I had a huge rack of ribs and my mum had salmon, definitely worth checking the restaurant out if you’re in Covent Garden. We didn’t have dessert as there was birthday cake waiting for us at home.

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I came home to more cards and a lovely bunch of flowers from a friend. I collapsed on the sofa in my PJ’s and ate a huge slice of cake. Bliss. And now I’m in my thirties *shudder* :)

Victoria

xoxo

Weekend in London

As a pre-birthday treat, my friend and I hit London this weekend. We stayed the night in the 5* St Pancras Renaissance hotel, which is adjacent to the train station and has been completely restored as a hotel as it was in 1873. When we arrived, we went to the champagne bar in the station, the longest champagne bar in Europe. Carly ordered the four tasting platter while I just had a large glass of bubbly.

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After we were sufficiently tipsy from the champers we went for cake at Peyton and Byrne – I didn’t get a photo of our cakes, which should tell you they were so yummy they were gone in seconds. I had the lemon poppy seed cake while Carly had banana and chocolate and we can highly recommend them! We had a wander round the shops in St Pancras and checked out the Harry Potter shop at King’s Cross station next door, well worth visiting if you’re  fan.

We then checked into our room, which was spacious and modern, and got ready for our night out. I took some outside shots of our hotel as we walked out to have dinner.

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After dinner and wine, we went back to our hotel and to The Gilbert Scott bar. We felt very posh and civilised sipping Cosmopolitan cocktails in our dresses. They also serve the biggest chips you’ve ever seen.

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The stairs in the hotel appear in the Spice Girl’s Wananbe video and we took a photos messing about on them. The whole area is decorated with a church-like feel to it.

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After a sleep in our very comfortable beds, we went into the Booking Office restaurant for breakfast – it’s a really stunning room.

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The breakfast buffet was one of the best hotel breakfast’s I’ve ever had. I started off with pastries then followed with the cooked breakfast – so good.

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We then waved goodbye to our hotel and headed off in a taxi to get our train home. It was a really fun and relaxing weekend, I could definitely get used to weekends like this!

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Victoria

xoxo

Sunday Songs

This week I’ve been listening to:

Tim McGraw ft. Taylor Swift’s Highway Don’t Care. I can’t stop playing this one:

Nicole Scherzinger’s catchy new song Boomerang:

A song off Paramore’s upcoming album. Still Into You:

Taylor Swift’s new single 22:

What have you been listening to?

Victoria

xoxo

 

Meet the author: Elizabeth Arroyo – The Second Sign

Elizabeth and I connected through our blogs and sent each other stories to critique. She was the first person to read the story that landed me an agent :) I gave Liz feedback on another story but it was her book The Second Sign that landed her a publishing deal. I finally read the book after waiting ages for it to come out and I thought it was fab. I’d describe it as a YA supernatural thriller about a girl and boy who find themselves caught up in the war between angels and demons. It’s fast paced, full of action and romance and well worth reading.

The Goodreads summary of The Second Sign: Bred to believe in the war between angels and demons, Gabby has come to the conclusion that love is responsible for war, jealousy, and all the other deadly sins she can think of. So when she’s exiled to the middle of nowhere for getting kicked out of her fifth school for fighting, she doesn’t expect to meet Jake. Much less fall in love. But Jake is quickly drawn to the eerie beauty of her violet eyes while Gabby is unsettled by their undeniable connection.

When a demon guardian comes to collect her soul, she refuses to give it up. She’s not a demon. She can’t be. Her father and twin brother are angels. The demon gives Gabby twenty-four hours to decide her allegiance, and then starts killing her short list of friends, leaving a message behind: She is the Second Sign.

As Gabby and Jake begin to unravel the mystery behind the Second Sign, she learns Jake may be the key to saving her soul. But it means a sacrifice has to be made that will change their lives forever.

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How did you come up with the idea for The Second Sign?

The idea came to me in a dream. Weird, I know. During construction of my basement, I dreamt one of the workers, dressed in red coveralls, entered my bathroom without a word. After a few minutes, he came out, stepped into the light, and exploded. But before he exploded he mentioned the second something. Second coming, second sign…something that I needed to get a grasp on. And after doing some research I found the biblical reference of the Second Sign. And a story was born.

The book creates a world where angels and demons are at war – did you have to do any research for the book and what interested you about these creatures?

I’ve always been afraid of demons. As a kid my dad would tell us stories about how the devil roamed the countryside taking a form of a man with a goats hoof. Kinda explains why I came out the way I did…lol.

Anyway…I always wanted to write something scary and since demons scare the crap out of me, and after the weird dream, I went with it.  Now the angels are a different story. They were harder to grasp. But after seeing some images as to how angels are portrayed. I started to fill in the blanks using my creative license. The element of free-will and the theory that love, hate, and everything in between is inherent in ALL living beings was born. Yes, even demons.

You write the story from both Gabby and Jake’s point of view – how did you draw their characters and did you find it challenging to juggle two POV’s?

I have always been curious with the whole nature vs. nurture question. Are we a product of our experiences in the world, or our biology? Or both? I drew Gabby’s character with that thought in mind. She’s half angel, her biology dictates that. But she is also experiencing the world through a different view point than her angel brother. This internal conflict drives her.

I wanted Jake to be her complete opposite. While she is pessimistic, he sees hope. While she doesn’t trust anyone, he trusts her. He is her better half. And he experiences the most change in his character arc at the end.

Writing from both POV’s was a challenge because I wanted it to be alternating chapters and I needed to show certain things through the viewpoint that made more sense, so I structured the scenes around the chapters.

There will be a sequel to the book (yay!) – did you find it difficult deciding how many answers to give the reader and how much to hold back for the next book?

Yes! I wanted TSS to have a mysterious element. Who did it? I didn’t want the answers to be obvious. During the querying stage of book one, I only had the first three chapters of book two outlined with a broad overview of the theme. But after book one published I started connecting the dots and they fell in place a bit too perfectly. Let’s just say, I expect that most of what went unanswered in book one is touched on in book two, hopefully, seamlessly. I relied on my betas and crit partners for book one to let me know how confused they were :)

Who is your favourite character in the book and why?

I actually fell in love with Pat. I am drawn to dark, broken characters. I had a lot of questions for Pat. But I also had to keep it elusive because book one wasn’t about him and I didn’t want to move the focus away from Gabby and Jake.

There is a lot of death and destruction in the book – was it important to you to not to sugarcoat anything for your YA audience?

This is such a great question! The first murder scene I wrote was Marty’s possession, and it happened during the first draft with little thought on my part. If that makes sense. It just happened. After she does what she does and enters her brother’s room I stopped writing. I had to pull away and regroup. I asked myself what the eff is going on? How could she? Why is this scene important? Is it too dark?

I realized then the story I was writing was dark. I also realized this was a pivotal point in the story to show the dangerous situation Gabby faced that would ultimately lead her down a path I wanted her to follow. Yes. It was necessary. I brainstormed it with my son. He loved it. I kept it. It wasn’t until after the reviews came in that I realized the reason why it was so dark. I wrote it in the POV of Marty. The person doing the action. It wasn’t a bystander looking in, but us looking out. And I think that changed the level of intimacy with the scene and the level of fear.

The tone of the book and the battle between angels and demons reminded me of TV show Supernatural – did you have any inspirations that fed into The Second Sign?

Ha! I’m so happy you asked this. Actually, no. But I found Supernatural after I started submitting. I had posted the first 250 words for review during a contest on my blog and one of the bloggers mentioned that it sounded like Supernatural. I’m like…yeah, it is supernatural. Then I looked it up and I found Dean. **swoons** I did a whole week of catching up on netflix. My son is now urging me to add the car in book two. lol.

(VW -this means we can have a photo of Dean, right? Right!)

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The Second Sign is your debut novel – did you know it would be The One when you were writing it?

No. I didn’t. I wrote TSS on a rebound from my first manuscript heartbreak. The one I wrote and submitted before TSS. I wrote this one to forget the other one. But I became optimistic when my crit partner said this was the one. She obviously knows more than me.

What advice do you have for aspiring authors out there?  

I don’t want to discourage anyone. And there are some great success stories out there. Those are the ones we tend to hear and clutch on to.  Publishing is hard work and you really need a thick skin to stay alive. It helped me to remind myself that publication is a perk, and not the reason I started writing in the first place. Even if I don’t publish anything any more I will continue to write because it is a part of me. So for advice…don’t lose the core reason of why you write. Do it because you love it and everything will fall into place.

Thanks for the interview! I do have a Q/A group up on Goodreads if anyone has any questions I’ll be happy to answer them.

Thanks Liz! If anyone has another question for Liz or me, feel free to ask it below! 

Victoria

xoxo

Happy International Women’s Day

I shared one of my favourite quotes on Twitter this morning to mark International Women’s Day and I started thinking about my favourite inspirational quotes by women so I thought I’d share them on here. I have definitely been inspired by successful women especially authors in my life so this seems like a great time to pay homage to them.

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What are your favourite quotes by woman?

Victoria

xoxo

 

 

When a book gives you FEELS

Firstly, happy World Book Day everyone! There is only one way I can mark this day and it’s to talk about books :) I’m going to talk about the last book I read and it’s one that gave me FEELS.

I think we all move from saying we like a book to loving a book when we read one that makes us feel something. Something that grabs us emotionally and crawls into our hearts. It could be because it has a warm and fuzzy ending, a happy ever after moment or it could take us on a moral journey, making us question who we are and want we want from life, it could be bittersweet and leave us feeling sad or it could just be a terrific page turner that leaves our hearts racing. There are a lot of books that I love for one or more of these reasons but it’s actually rare for a book to make me cry. Often I have a lump in my throat at the end of a book or just a big goofy smile but one that leaves me with ugly tears doesn’t happen that often.

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Last year, the only book that produced real tears was John Green’s The Fault In Our Stars and those who have read it can imagine why :) This year, I’ve found a book early on that made me cry – The Last First Kiss by Ali Harris. Most of my reading tends to be young adult because I love it but I do mix it up by reading adult books now and again and this one made it on my list. I enjoyed Ali Harris’ first book but this one really moved me. Taking us on a journey though the relationship of Ryan and Molly, jumping back and forward through their story, we find out who they fell in love and how they were torn apart.

If anyone thinks women’s fiction or if we must call it chick-lit is just fluff, they should read this. A story of love and friendship, of growing together and growing apart, I was totally absorbed in finding out what happens to these two characters. The timeline jumps around but I didn’t find it hard to work out where we were in the story. The two leads were well-drawn characters as well their family and friends and there was often humour as well as moving moments. Yes it’s unashamedly romantic and has it’s share of slushy passages but it never lost me along the way. I suppose you could say it’s similar to One Day in that it spans years of the same relationship but this one wedged itself into my heart more than that book did and the last couple of chapters made me cry so hard, I couldn’t see the words on the page. I’m not going to spoil the story in case you guys want to read it but know that the ending is bittersweet.

Somehow this book is both heart-warming and heart-wrenching and Ryan and Molly’s story will stay with me for a long time.

What was the last book to give you FEELS?

Victoria

xoxo

 

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